The selection of your mise-en-scene in terms of the costume work well to create a strong star image, particularly for the female vocalist.
There are some lovely shots of your female singer but more close-ups are definitely necessary, of both the male and female singers, in order to 'sell' your artist.
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I loved the high angle shot, it's a shame there weren't more of them.
You must take your production sound out ASAP as it is extremely distracting.
Also your synching is slightly out in places, this needs work.
You might also want to experiment with some filters to enhance your footage, think about colour changes and also speed changes and possibly reversing some sections...
This has the potential to be great, it just needs a bit more work. Keep going.
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