Teacher Feedback on Pitch and Blog

Your pitch was very good and there are clear links in your initial developmental stage between your music promo video and your ancillary products, which is great.
I particularly like the contrasts you intend to create by a mix of black and white and strong colours, and carrying that contrasting idea through by contrasting your costumes and locations i.e ballgowns in cornfields.
Your blog is good, my advice for making it even better is that it is currently lacking visual representations of your influences. Look at some other real and student music videos that explore similar themes to yours and then blog and analyse them.
Props and costume lists are important and location scouting is also necessary. In addition, some of your posts need labeling to indicate who exactly contributed to the content, even if it is all of you that needs to be made clear. This is particularly the case with the post of your Goodwin analysis presentations.
This is looking very good, keep up the good work.